{"content":{"sharePage":{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"67029038","dateCreated":"1397144927","smartDate":"Apr 10, 2014","userCreated":{"username":"stevenrdwolfe","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/stevenrdwolfe","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/thisismyenglish1302class.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/67029038"},"dateDigested":1532769338,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"general","description":"Overall you are following the rubric (except for the sources) and clear about the points, supported with examples. 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Other times, telling a white lie can become a life or death situation, especially when it\u2019s people in power, like the government lying to its citizens. 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For example: &quot;....seem like less of a major daily concern for the average citizen than...&quot;","rangeActions":[{"name":"Comment added","rangeText":"less concerning th","dateCreated":"1397144732","user":{"username":"stevenrdwolfe","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/stevenrdwolfe","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"diffUrl":"\/page\/diff\/Atomic+Cafe+%28Essay+3%29\/501780448?mode=code"}],"replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"67028966","dateCreated":"1397144732","smartDate":"Apr 10, 2014","userCreated":{"username":"stevenrdwolfe","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/stevenrdwolfe","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/thisismyenglish1302class.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/67028966"},"dateDigested":1532769338,"commentId":"501674962_4","orphaned":false,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"comment","title":"Comment: 1. Rubric asks for two sources. Film ...","description":"1. Rubric asks for two sources. Film doesn't count as one;<br \/>\n2. Rubric specifies two spruces to support your position on the issue.","rangeActions":[{"name":"Comment added","rangeText":"<br \/>\nWorks Cited:<br \/>\n<br \/>\n<span style=\"font-family: 'Arial Unicode MS'; font-size: 13pt;\">1<\/span><span style=\"font-family: Arial;\">) Rafferty, Kevin, Jayne Loader, Pierce Rafferty, and Rick Eaker. The Atomic Cafe. 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